First Chapter
On the mountain peak,
the place of the unkown birds and the hot snow.
There lies a filthy soul.
A lost soul.
A lonely one.
Near the banks of the river,
the one they called holy and yet let everything down,
sits quitely a refused soul.
A lonely soul.
It's then when he calls it:
"My River"
The waves wahsed away the castles.
His dreams were "Sand Dreams".
Second Chapter
For days he waited for a shoulder,
a shoulder to support his burnt head.
The head which had eyes,
that saw the confusions galore.
The head that had ears,
which heard the foul men speak.
The head,
that symbolized loneliness.
Doors remained shut,
and windows sealed.
There wasn't an answer to ,
the solemn pleas.
Third Chapter
Brainwashed,
the psychedelic mind works like a pendulum;
Swerves into the deep interiors
and comes out again.
He is a horologist's dream.
His thoughts enter his shallow heart,
to bounce back again.
It's a devil's dream.
Final Chapter
He must find a friend,
a soul to relax with.
The rocking chair relaxes in the outdoor sun.
He finds a shadow that bleeds,
the one that has been roaming for a companion too.
He finds himself.
7 comments:
nice philosophy of life!..
I liked the imagery in the third chapter quite a bit, scary and well crafted.
a philosophical poem with a realistic ending...its written well with a lot of imaginations and unspoken thoughts...
a lot of depth..
really deep ending, will be imprinted in my mind for a long time. Good job.
scarry..but a tiny speck ofphilosophy that makes it bearable.
Should I say you have done it again?
Hmm, okay, you have.
Amrita
[Dec30,2007 8.00p.m]
really good,there was philosophy,there was the realistic touch to it but most of all it clearly gave out the feeling of loneliness,words were picked carefully which emphasised on the whole matter in one word a SUPERB poem which can even break the records of poets like P.B.Shelly and John Keats. Good job
surrealistic tho, but highly magnetic... reminds me of jung's psychoanalysis........ high thinking, keep writing.. one of the best blogs i have seen
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