well i guess it'll be sing and not sings in context to this line "to sings two songs"....Its gr8 t read it coz of its lucid flow.......but the best part I must say are your illustrations....It makes me or infact every reader feel that u actually write keeping the illustration in mind........
the ghosts come and sing me lullabies,stories of slumber and dream.loved the concept....gr8 work...
wat an imaginativ powr...hats off 2 ya..."My music is a ghost,tends to die.but each time the ears sing to them,they come alive."wndrful wrk...kp it up..
Thats the thinking chin resting on the fingers singing a song of the ghost of music...each stanza like reeds of harmonica...U sing it and it sings to u ...Wonderful!
as usual.. amazingly fluid train of thots.. very beautifully versed illustrations..n a very mature finish! It keeps getting better dude! :)
yea...and to think u came up with this in college...if i remember correctly we were all sitting at the ac canteen when u came up with this....of course taht time ur hand writing was so bad i technically didn't get head or tail of ur write up.now i shall tell u-" i like it. the similarities and images framed are phenomenal!!"
@RaiYes, that was a typing error.@SreshthaI wrote this in 'his' class with a 'perception'. You get it, don't you?
I don't think I need to tell you that it's pretty good. As already mentioned by ALMOST everybody lovely illustrations..makes it a wonderful read..rather follows an unusual harmony..which is nice..Carry on the good work =)Amri_moo
oh yea...i get that.*winks*
gr8 job dude!!dusn dat sound a bit lyk Cobain writing?! i lykd it! gr8!!
your recent works leave me intimidated every time i decide to comment.anyway...i think it is a symphonic work...and somehow i can connect with it...i loved the last few lines...it creates a sense to linger on...i look forward to reading more...
@ DriptoWhy Cobain? Anything morbid has to be of Cobain cult?
wtf was that supposed to be? poetry is an art, my friend, not random lines bunched together in an effort to be 'cool'.
@KaushikShow some some poetry, my friend. Let me learn as well.
You write very well.
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