that was... ahem... disturbing. vivid but somewhat weird.
@VinayakI have not quite finished this! :P
clear darkness... man i hate u for writing dis.. but as usual.. d message was loud n so sharp it stung!
... and i thought my blog was random.
This one is...well, kinda unsettling. P.S. As my 20 years of experience speaketh,it invites to play the game of Life!
@SBR or Jhinka or ManaliWhat do you mean by 'unsetting'?
unsetting aabar kothay likhlaam?? :O
I meant 'unsettling'
way da go boyee! dats wat i call an unsettlingly superb potrayal of da "man who (finally) sold da world".i just loved dese lines.."His little home,by the miner's den,was a dream like figure.It ate prostitutes by night,and drank the men playing cards,in the noon.And,when Me was not somewhere else,it smiled."it was awesome!!
Why the Cobain connection, again?
hey der!! amazing blog u've got!! nd super cool poem!!!check out my blog...though am n amateur wen it comes 2 comparing our blogs...
It's verrrry disturbing..in other words so youu.One of my favourites so far.Good job.:)
wow!This one's a bit different 4m ur genre of poetry,ain't it?I liked the concept & the ending.don't 4gt me and do come 2 my blog as well!u r d 1 who 1st created it!remember?
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