3rd line...correct kor.
"Dont u see the difference?. Days before yesterday when she created music with her crystal fingers. She was incomplete as a woman.But now as time steals time away and the tears roll down her cheeks, she is complete. Isn't it a good thing to have happened????"
"Those who think,never think". I love this idea and the jerky pace.Your poem definitely is worth 'remembrance' as the last lines have a lingering music.Reminds me of the last couple of lines of Solitary Reaper.But the question lends more power.And thanks 4 ur comment on my blog!Deeptesh
@MadhuraSexy?@ShresthaAnd, I licked the musuic and sang with my silvery voice.@DeepteshI do not remember the lines. What was it again?
Man,This be good piece of poetry,Don't you see that already?Oh just one li'l thing, I think it should be 'I have SEEN mylon bullets'..? In your 3rd stanza.Awesome!..I need to read the book you've read recently to get new adjectives.
dekhechish....ganja na khele tor matha koto fertile hoye jaye....awesome man!!!!!!!
@ Amrita yes, I loved the book. Could not mug it though. And, misktake rectified@ SulakshanaHow do you know I was not actually under it?
kheya here..I must congratulate you for this.it reminds me of a certain book i read...by sam bourne...it is powerful yet vulnerable and amidst a lot of discomfort there is this sense of tranquility.wonderful.
"Remember,they who think,never think.The Rabbi who thinks he thought,is thinking."i likd it very much...n jishu's said da rest!
very good poetry.
@ W2Thank you! :)
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