a good thing.you take time to write your pieces.goes to show how much you put into each of them.*If you die thinking,you were never rich.If you die dreaming,you were rich.And,be both if you die trying.*very very nice.
Yes, thank you.But, I do not really take much time for writing some thing. It's just that I write things in large time gaps, and at times within a short while. It's just that.
Good 2 read a poem of yours after a long time gap.I liked the structural concept of prologue body and epilogue. weird though I wrote one in the same fashion a few days back though I didn't blog it. And at times,your poem explores the depth of ur thinking.Do come 2 my blog as well. It's been ages!!!
@ DeepteshI does not have a body in the first place. That, was the whole idea.@MahiThank You! :)
you are a poet,you deserve better than a comment :)who are we to judge?write if you need to write..if you can't help but write..write out of desperation and not fashion..write to breathe.i'll read because i live on poetry :|
@SenjutiI write for 'just like that'.
that's so dali.
'disoriented' and 'unsettled'happy? :)
@SenjutiJoy Salvadore@AmritaWasn't that an expected comment? :P
A very apt name for the piece.. innovative surely and disturbing..as always. :-|
finally magritte, after all that dali :D
Dali still remains my favourite Surrealist! :P
I loved it where the romance blends with the darkness... "mixing memory and desire" ... deadly alleys and fire are what the poet needs, and you've got it.
Thank you, poet! :)
After few days,I won't be there.She'll be off to Isles.I hope the song would still burn then.May, the music never bid a farewell to you........................The poem does a lot to the senses and it may be on a very personal note that i feel the poem is very true,real and naked in its thoughts...You keep up the good work!
@ KheyaYes, I'm glad you put it that way.Nude in a sense, it brings the skeletal remains of it all.
"Prologue.And, yet.They talk of people, shivering beside the ring,with liquids in their hand.I wonder whether any stars will fall today.My wish is a waste."marriage.wishes.very nice.long and thought provoking especially the beginning and the end.
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