I lost my poem,
lost long back.
I wish I never find it,
things of blue-black origin
search for it,
I lost my poem.
- - -
It is just not coming,
not even when I wriggle my insides,
not even when I rack my senses.
It's gone.
Lines are cliched,
sand is white.
Love is not over,
lines are.
- - -
This probably ends here.
Spaces and corners,
are filled with,
fluids of emptiness.
Emptiness is filled with,
all I never knew,
is what I do not.
- - -
Farewell.
An article for the man!
16 years ago
20 comments:
never let it go.
one of your best.
:)
An artiste's repentance on losing his loved creation......or has the pain of procreating newer forms turned out to be too over-bearing?I liked the confessional element in this and I have always loved your diction.Nice one :-)
amazing Debs!!!
m stealing 2lines from over here...u'll know which...
seeeeeeeee!
@Deeptesh
Trust me, this is out of sheer emniemniness.
@Mahi
Err, I think I know which ones.
@Mooo
No
I hope ur quiz went well.....there's a new poem on my blog..pls chk it out.And when r u coming over?I'm waiting for u.
Do c my poem.
Neka Postoh.
The song shall return some day, with a different colour, it's like goodbye till we meet again. Cheers!
a poem
about the lack of poetry
ironic
heartbreakingly so
heartfelt you.....
This was nice. Unique, even. I think this is the first time I've read a poem that says that the poet can no longer write a poem.
Why don't you update your blog? Or does "Last" indeed mean the last? Is this blog dead?
Coleridge's feelings on losing all of Kubla Khan (except for the fragment he'd already written down) might have been expressed this way...um, had he been a more modernistic and not a Romantic poet.
da poem says u dont have lines to rite.....u have forgotten wat poetry is but ur poetry is in ur forgetfulness............trust me!!!!!!!!!
@Aparajita
It is mixed. In a way, I feel I have lost my touch. But, else I feel there is more to come. :)
Will definitely look forward to more of your works, if they are indeed to come.
By the way, the post that you read on my blog is not one of the best. I'd really like you to read "The Music Room" and comment on it.
Read the fiction, will you?!
you are an inspiration, bro!!
@ Yash
What? :O
ya, ur poems are amazing!
Thanks I like your share.keep share.
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